WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing
16/10/2017
At the Banana Show.
On a cold day me mum Gracie and Lexi got in the car to go to the Banana Show in Kerikeri.
On the way we played a game of eye spy. It was fun.
When we were there we had to wait a while. Then the show started. I liked it. I liked the part when the guy wrapped himself in the sail. I felt nervous. I thought he would fall but he did not fall. When it finished it was time for the coloring competition. I got my second prize.
I felt happy.
Hi Milly. It's Dad. I loved hearing your story, and the bit about the man wrapped in the sail. Great writing!
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