Persuasive Writing: We should drink water every day.

WALT to use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.

We should drink water every day

I think we should drink water every day

Firstly I think we should drink water every day because

it helps us to swallow our food and it spreads nutrients around our body.

Secondly I think we should drink water every day because

it`s good for your body and it has no sugar.

Another reason why I think we should drink water every day is because

we should replace the water inside our body especially on hot days.

Lastly I think we should drink water every day because it is very healthy for your body.

So that’s why I think we should drink water every day.

Persuasive Writing-Kapahaka is important to learn.

20/09/17

Kapa Haka is important to learn.

I think that kapa haka is important to learn.

First I think kapa haka is important because

we learn all different kinds of songs.

Secondly I think kapa haka is important because it’s good to help us learn Te Reo Maori.

Another reason why I think kapa haka is important is because we learn how to keep in beat.

Lastly I think kapa haka is important because it is fun and I like performing on the stage.

So that’s why I think kapa haka is important.

Look at the taonga I made for my Dad.

Happy Father's Day, Dad.

My Father's Day Poster.

Recount Writing- At home.

17/08/17

At home

On Wednesday I stayed home I did not go to school because I was sick. I stayed home for a while and I had my medicine. After that I felt better.

I said to mum, “Can I go to school tomorrow?”

And mum said, “Yes.”

Recount Writing-Camping with Dad.

I am learning add details to my ideas.

07/08/17

Camping with dad.

In the weekend I went camping with dad and Gracie.

I like going camping at Puriri Bay. Dad and me and Gracie went running. I got very tired.

Our tent was blue. Blue is my favourite colour. I love the colour blue.

We went swimming and dad saw a big wave. I got my boogie board. I went on the big wave. It was fun and then dad said, “Time for bed, Milly and Gracie.”

My Addition Basic Facts

I have been practising my addition basic facts. I wanted to get faster and more accurate.
When I first started my top score was 11. Today I scored 27.
Here are results.